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Off Earth Series

Spare parts and handshakes

March 2, 2018 By K. D. McAdams

Photo by Ander Burdain on Unsplash

Grep didn’t mind being on the Lowell. With all she knew about science and technology it still amazed her that the standard twenty degrees environmental here felt warmer than it did at Lagrange-4.

What amazed her more was the size of the ship being constructed just outside. There were limits to the scale of construction for a ship that would approach two tenths of light speed, but knowing them and seeing them were different things.

“They plan to burn the thrusters for something like forty years.” Burt explained needlessly.

“They’ll be accelerating for almost half a lifetime.” She observed.

“And cruising for the other half. Some of them are hoping their grandchildren will experience the deceleration and their great grand children will touch the surface of a new planet.” Her host here on the Lowell was no less impressed even though he was around the project every day.

Grep wasn’t sure that sounded humane. Her boss, and friend, Tanner Nazca was born on a long range cruiser. They had just finished a ten year burn when the event happened and Tanner turned the ship around.

What if a similar event happened forty or fifty years out? Anyone deciding to turn the ship around wouldn’t even be alive when it returned to Earth.

That was probably the point. After Tanner turned their ship around and came back the financial backers realized how easily an entire investment could be lost. They had to send the craft and crew far enough away that turning the thing around offered no benefit to those making decisions.

“Probably the most advanced cruiser ever built. And you guys want ten thousand salvaged connectors to complete construction?” Grep asked.

The only reason she flew over here was that the request was so preposterous. They went back and forth electronically, held numerous video conversations but neither side could convey their need.

“Projections show that the vibration from the thrusters will be incredibly minor, but after about thirty consistent years of it several sections of wire will be damaged. The engineering AI found these connectors in an old data base and said they would provide the wires with another fifteen years of life.” Burt maintained his faith in the automated system.

It didn’t surprise her that a human derived AI had developed a human like flaw.

“Those connectors have never been salvaged as independent parts. They’re all fastened to a larger circuit board.” She explained her side of the equation.

“So take them off.” Burt shrugged his shoulders.

He was probably told by the AI that this was the solution. Obviously he didn’t consider the cost or effort to remove a cheap connector from a cheap circuit board. It wasn’t cheap.

“They were fastened with an epoxy that is extremely durable. Our efforts to separate the parts have been labor intensive for poor quality results. Why don’t you double the wire shielding to get more life out of it?” She did not want to be responsible for their engineering job but couldn’t help the question.

“That much extra coating over that many wires would require a complete redesign of the ship. Everything was laid out to millimeter precision.” Burt admonished her.

Grep held her tongue. If that was true, how were they planning to fit connectors into that space? This was not her problem. She was here to make sure they could sell them something they could deliver.

Scrolling up on her display, Grep reviewed some notes. One of the disassembly bots predicted it could learn to generate a clean finished connector consistently after five hundred to seven hundred and fifty trials. With only ten-thousand-one-hundred-eighty-nine pieces on hand they would not be able to deliver ten-thousand finished parts.

Destroying all the assemblies and not selling one of the piece to Off Earth Manufacturing would leave them with two pieces no one wanted. At least when they were together they could sell a handful to Off Earth Repair and Maintenance for their refurbishment jobs.

“We cannot supply the full order. Would you be willing to accept ninety percent of the units and we’ll take a point or two off the final price?” She extended an offer.

“The proposal was for ten thousand plus, not plus or minus. I’m sure there will be some installation errors and losses. Ninety percent is not an option.” Burt emphasized their request.

“Well, good luck then. We’re out.” Grep hated to walk away from revenue but she knew better than to risk an order they were bound to fail.

“You cannot be out. This project will not be delayed. I’m sure you understand how tightly managed the ages of passengers and crew are. Even a one year delay could cause massive changes in their status. They’ve been planning this departure for fifteen years.” Burt looked scared.

Grep tried to imagine a five year old on the living room floor down on Earth. For her birthday she received an envelope that told her they would be sending her on a one way mission to deep space when she turned twenty-two. The rest of her life would be spent with people convincing her that she was lucky and this was a good thing.

No one would ever mention that there were other choices. Stay on Earth or in orbit and learn a trade. Wait until you’re eighteen and make your own decision about what you find interesting and what you want to study.

Those who were older and had either taken or passed on their chance to follow their bliss were less concerning. A thirty year old signing on to manage some mundane task on a ship barreling into the great void of deep space was fine. Stupid, but fine.

The seniors on the flight would be so old and so far from Earth by the time they realized what a mistake they had made it wouldn’t matter.

“Why don’t you manufacture the pieces?” Grep realized that they had missed the obvious.

Burt was silent. He carefully looked at his tablet and scanned some piece of information.

“Burt?” She prodded.

“Our capacity won’t meet demand. And we’d have to delay another project that has better revenue impact.” He conceded.

This was the kind of thing that drove Tanner crazy. It was also the type of thing that would get Burt fired if anyone found out he told her.

As was often the case the toughest engineering problem was made so due to artificial human constraints. She had an idea that was a little risky, but just the kind of chance Tanner liked to take.

“We’ll sell you ten thousand finished connectors with a condition. You need to send us seven-hundred-and-fifty that meet your design specs. We don’t want to run the risk of sending you something that won’t be approved.” She hoped he was too nervous about the project to see how she was trying to leverage them.

“I don’t have seven-fifty to send you.” He protested.

“Make them. The only way you’re getting out of a huge penalty for failure to deliver is if you take a small revenue hit on that other project and make some samples.” She pushed.

The small conference room fell silent. Burt was considering the offer and she hoped he would take it.

“If I send you two-fifty to start will you begin working? I’ll send another two fifty a month later and the final two fifty in the third month?” He countered her proposal.

It didn’t really matter when he sent them, as long as they arrived before she was due to send the final shipment. Grep fully expected that the last connectors delivered to the Lowell would be units that had been manufactured there anyway.

“Our quality control could damage a few units. I’ll need the first fiver hundred in the first month, you can spread them out however you like. The final two-fifty need to be delivered in the second month. We’re not going to drive urgency if you guys don’t deliver on your side of the project.” Grep hoped this wasn’t tool aggressive.

Burt did not respond immediately. He was working on his tablet moving numbers and playing with dates. She let him work as a small smile crept across her lips.

“One hundred a week for the first five weeks and the final two-fifty on week ten.” Burt announced after several minutes.

“Deal,” Grep extended her hand.

They shook and both parties leaned back in their chairs.

With all their technology and science, business still came down to a cheap alloy connector and a hand shake. Perhaps the human element was still involved to keep everything at the right pace. If this negotiation had been turned over to the bots it would have been solved months ago. When problems moved out of the way departure dates started to come closer and people considered their second thoughts.

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Filed Under: For Readers, Off Earth, Short Stories Tagged With: Grep, Off Earth Series, science fiction, short stories, the lowell

A grab bag of updates and it’s school vacation week

February 26, 2018 By K. D. McAdams

It’s school vacation week here in New Hampshire so the kids are home, all day long. I have a grab bag of updates, so read through for all the news.

I have a note in my planner that reminded me to get ahead in my word count because productivity would be low this week. When I wrote that I can remember thinking I was pretty smart. Now I’m remembering that I’m pretty much a moron. The note should have shown up weeks ago so I could actually get ahead.

But there is some good news, I finished the first draft of They Awake! To satisfy my habitual side, here is the structured update:

Book 1 – They Awake
Target release date – New date! 7/6/2018 
Last weeks word count/target – 6,664/6,500
This weeks word count target – 5,000 words of short stories
Total words/projected – 95,327/95,000

I love this story and these characters. There are a lot of details to iron out as I go through the re-write, but I’m looking forward to spending more time in this world.

My plan is to take a week off from the story. I’ll be writing some more short stories in the Off Earth world this week. Then I’ll jump into some hardcore revisions next week.

If you have any interest in beta-reading please let me know, I’d love to get you an early copy when it’s ready.

In other news, Revelation – Book 6 of The Seamus Chronicles is available this Friday, March 2. This book wraps up The Seamus Chronicles series and while I’m sad to see the end of it, I think I wrapped things up pretty well. There is one minor story line I left dangling, but I don’t want to say what it is or why. At least not yet.

Revelation – Book 6 of The Seamus Chronicles

On top of all that, I finished the paper back version of American Lease, the first book in my Dylan Cold thriller series. I should have my first order delivered in the next few days. There were a few proof copies, but I can’t wait to get the final version in my hands. If you’re a thriller reader and looking for something new, please check it out (the paperback will be linked to the ebook soon).

As a reminder, the release after Revelation will be Deceptive Practices, a new Dylan Cold novel. It’s scheduled for April 13th and it’s another exciting challenge for Dylan, Abbey, and the whole town of Brookford.

 

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Filed Under: For Readers Tagged With: finished first draft, new release, Off Earth Series

3 steps for validating your series idea

January 24, 2018 By K. D. McAdams

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Coming up with ideas isn’t a challenge for most writers, myself included. The actual challenge is picking a single idea and following through on it. I must have 2 dozen novels started but collecting dust in the cloud because I decided to shift gears to the next great idea.

Deciding what ideas are good enough to pursue as a series is mostly instinct, peppered with a few data points. It can be a tough notion to explain because there is no single item to indicate a great series idea. Almost all of my ideas initially feel like great series concepts. Many of them aren’t.

So how do you validate your idea to see if it’s worthy of planning a series around? In an effort to document how I decided to pursue my Off Earth Industries series, below is is my answer to how I played with the concept to make sure I could develop it into a series.

Start by asking why and what, then become a genre junkie.

I wanted to write about an asteroid miner, so why would a human ever need to land on an asteroid? I knew there were three compelling reasons – power, money, or love – for anyone to do something foolishly risky.

When I played through a few power and love stories they didn’t excite me.

The money angle was different. If the main character was taking this huge risk for money he must have some deeper desire. Any obstacle that would get in the way of him earning the money would also get in the way of him achieving his true goal.

So I played the three why’s game.

Q: Why would this character risk landing on an asteroid?
A: To earn money.

Q: Why did this character need money?
A: To pay off a debt.

Q: Why was it important for this character to pay off a debt?
A: Because he wasn’t allowed on Earth while he carried a debt.

At the start, my main characters driving goal is to be allowed to set foot on Earth. In the beginning, money looks like the primary obstacle to achieving his goal (it’s not).

To see if this idea could stretch beyond one book, I asked what.

Q: What could alter my main characters goal of setting foot on Earth?
A: An alien attack that threatens Earths survival.

So now my main character has to shift his goal from earning money to pay off a debt to some how saving Earth from total destruction. That feels like a pretty momentous change, certainly worthy of more than one or two books.

It also presents a drastic shift in my initial story idea. No longer is this a series about an asteroid miner. To justify my characters goal and struggle there needs to be a complete ecosystem of humans living and working in space. That ecosystem feels strong enough to support a series.

Now that I knew this was turning into an alien invasion series, it was time to head over to Amazon and do some market research. The goal of researching other books in your genre is not to copy them, it’s to understand what readers are enjoying and what concepts they are paying money for. What do the covers look like, how do the blurbs read, what kind of titles do they have? Even if you intend to shock your readers and do something completely different, you need to know how to reach them.

You should try and become a genre-junkie for the sub-genre you are targeting for this series. Whenever you have free time, read reviews, blurbs, list covers you love and generally surf the shelves of this genre.

When researching a sub-genre I like to look at the top twenty paid books and focus on those that are $2.99 or more. These books are popular because of their quality, not due to a price discount or marketing push. In many cases I’ll buy the book and read it, but sometimes if it doesn’t sound appealing I’ll stick to the look inside feature.

It’s important to understand readers expectations and what they’ll be comparing your work to. At some point you’re going to doubt your project and convince yourself it might never sell. Knowing that there are other books in your genre that are doing well can help motivate you to keep going. Your book won’t be the same, but it has the chance to be just as good if you keep writing and working.

In my next post I’m going to talk about how I took this idea and expanded it to come up with the building blocks of a series.

Over the coming weeks and months I’ll share with you my thoughts, notes and tips for each step. You can easily follow along by joining my mailing list. In return I’ll send you a copy of my Successful Series Writer Manifesto and a weekly digest of posts.

If you want to follow along from a readers perspective, you can jump over to that section of my blog, or sign up for my Sci-Fi mailing list.

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Filed Under: For Writers, Successful Series Writers Tagged With: Gener junkie, Off Earth Series, research, three why's

A companion for sorting

January 12, 2018 By K. D. McAdams

Humans are messy and tricky. While I was thinking about artificial intelligence working aboard a space salvage station I realized that there would be some unlabeled parts. This was even before the story about John Young smuggling a corned beef sandwich on board a Gemini-3 launch. When systems can’t identify things, people are going to get the job. Below is a story about a junk sorter from the Off Earth Series world.

Photo by Mike Wilson on Unsplash

Before the first orbital war there were tens of thousands of pieces of space debris orbiting the Earth. Expended satellites were parked in a geo-stationary orbit where they wouldn’t affect modern, functional satellites. Smaller decommissioned satellites were de-orbited to mostly burn up in the atmosphere though in some cases their mass survived and plummeted into one of the oceans. It wasn’t a great system and many people believe it was the true cause of the first orbital war. A piece of Chinese space debris collided with a United States based space tourist station. One hundred and four customers died and an equal number of staff perished when exposed to the void of space.

When the orbital war was finished the every day amenities people on Earth were accustomed to were gone. No satellite communications, no global positioning and limited weather forecasting. There was so much debris orbiting the planet and so little information available that any space launch was considered a suicide mission.

Then Kai Nazca returned.

Flying the rock now known as Lagrange-4 back from deep space was remarkable enough. But when he saw the mess preventing him from returning to his planet his next idea was pure brilliance. Using old radio wave technology he was able to communicate with the early ruling body that was to become the Planetary Operating Alliance (POA). In exchange for cleaning up the debris circling the Earth he was granted exclusive rights to the stationary orbit of Lagrange-4 in perpetuity and passable to his heirs, as well as complete ownership of anything he was able to recover for a ten year period.

The ten year period for ownership ended long ago. Now they were required to purchase any debris from the owners before it could be salvaged. While every component of a ship launched into space was logged and labeled, humans were less precise. Tourists, laborers and stowaway’s all brought personal affects with them. When a vessel failed and the escape pods were used, plenty of unlabeled items were left behind, eventually needing salvage.

Artificial Intelligence and bots were great at processing individual labeled items. They were terrible at processing unlabeled items or products that were assembled from multiple-labled items. A.I. Would routinely label complex systems as something simple based on the component on it’s surface.

When A.I. And bots fail, humans get involved. That’s how Kurt Plaque ended up in the massive salvage bay of Lagrange-4 parsing through a motley collection of jewelry. The value of gold, platinum and silver dropped dramatically after it was discovered in abundance in several asteroid mines. Here in space there was a market for handmade Earth goods. A gold necklace with a locket made on Earth was worth more than it’s weight in gold.

[Read more…] about A companion for sorting

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Filed Under: For Readers, Off Earth Tagged With: Artificial Intelligence, cthulhu ship, Off Earth Series, salvage bay, salvage bots, short stories

Becoming Kai

January 5, 2018 By K. D. McAdams

This is a short story I wrote while planning my new Off Earth science fiction series. It is some deep back story that tries to get into how a human will take a risk so crazy that an artificial intelligence drone refuses to do it. So meet Kai Nazca, I hope you enjoy.

Image copyright Dmitry Islentyev via Dreamstime.com

Becoming Kai
by K. D. McAdams copyright 2018

The launch vehicle rolled and he caught a glimpse of the Nazca plain below. Simple, remarkable drawings sat motionless as they had for thousands of years. Who made them and why could not be answered regardless of how much technological progress humans made.

No matter how far into space humans went there would be no explaining much of their history.

Lowering the blast visor on his helmet, he finally permitted the tears to flow. Dreams of living and working in the stars belonged to his father. His heaven was on the ground, feet in cool damp grass waiting to hear his young daughters squeals of delight.

There was no one left that he wanted to hear squeal and no delight.

People always talked about the pace of change. Some felt it was always coming faster while others insisted it was a constant. He would rather not have had the proof of it’s increasing pace.

Transitioning from peace to war should have taken more time. All of the reporters and pundits promised that cooler heads would prevail, things were going to work out.

And then they didn’t.

The hot heads were in charge. Their constituents all salivating for war. Tired, simple people believing in the glory of standing up for an institution that abused, lied, and coerced it’s citizens at every turn.

The rest of the world looked on in horror as the United States tore itself apart. Armed militias stood up to National Guard troops and neighbors drew arms against neighbors. Any slight, real or perceived devolved into a gun battle in those first few days.

Video reporters loved it. Everyone clicked on their links and watched the violence with nervous excitement. Would it happen in their town? On their street?

Never. Most people believed that their own town was exempt from hostility and infighting. It was always the next town over or the people from the nearby city causing trouble.

Until it wasn’t.

Guns were everywhere. You could get shot for anything.

Cut someone off on the street, a barrage of bullets.

Music too loud? Gunned down.

Laugh at the wrong time? Executed in cold blood.

They didn’t have time to pack up and leave. Besides where would they have gone? San Diego had been their home for almost fifteen years. There was no family somewhere else that could take them in. Plus the war broke out so fast.

So they stayed. The bathtub was filled with water and canned goods were inventoried and rationed. Doors were locked and windows covered. Their house truly became their castle.

When the food got scarce he and his wife ventured out. Scavenging for cans and boxes of non-perishables in an abandoned market nearly got them both killed. A hail of hot lead exploded most of the packages they were able to gather. They went home nearly empty handed and shared the meager rations with the girls.

After that his wife wanted to leave. It didn’t matter where they went, she said. Just get my girls out of here before we get killed, or worse.

No, it’ll pass. They have to be almost done, order will be restored. We’ll be get by and start rebuilding, was his promise.

An ignorant man committing to things beyond his control. The bitter argument dragged into the night until they couldn’t fight anymore.

The next morning, before sunrise he snuck out. All he wanted to do was get a box of donuts or some packaged pastries to say he was sorry. She was right, they could leave.

He wasn’t gone long, maybe an hour or a little more. Not long enough for anything to happen.

It hurt to think about the injuries and the pain they must have felt. But their eyes were the things that almost killed him. Vacant, lost eyes looking at nothing but staring intently into the distance. Death robbing them of even the ability to close their lids

His blind rage was impossible to describe. It couldn’t be remembered. A manic animosity was all that was existed in him and it was deep in his soul.

The trail of blood and death was now his legacy. For days on end he prowled the city killing anyone and everyone he encountered. Young or old, man or woman it didn’t matter, they died.

How could a person who had lost what he lost, and took what he took go on? Where in the world was he supposed to go to escape this internal hell?

Nowhere.

By the time he came out of his murderous furry he was deep in the heart of Mexico. He couldn’t remember taking any vehicles for more than a few miles at a time. It was a hell of a walk, leaving him gaunt. But there were fewer people who appeared as threats and here they were not hiding. War was happening somewhere else.

What had been third world countries five years ago were now bastions of hope. Countries that embraced the space economy were too busy to fight amongst themselves. There were launches to plan and support.

And that was what led him to Peru. They needed people to get on rocket ships and go into space. It was dangerous, a better chance of dying than making it into orbit, but it was better than being on the Earth that he had just experienced.
Once he completed the required two weeks of training he had two days off before launch.

He was lucky enough to hook up with a mining crew destined for an asteroid that was out just beyond Mars. Other companies were sending out drones with artificial intelligence to do their mining. But drones were expensive and had a tendency to fail.

Failed drones required humans to fix them. So the company decided that they might as well just send humans, there were plenty of volunteers. A civil war in the most prosperous nation on the planet left enough desperate refugees that people were fighting over the chance to die in space.

There were twenty-eight crew members on board with him. The ones that had killed to get here were easy to pick out. Those that hadn’t had no idea who they were sharing space with and the type of person that last used the oxygen they now breathed.

Several of them were talking and trying to make friends. Typical banter, what’s your name, where are you from. Nerves permeating every word.

How many were telling the truth and how many were living lies? It didn’t matter, up here in space it would be a fresh start. If they made it.

“Hey, how about you buddy. Who are you?” A friendly young woman asked.

The launch vehicle completed its rotation and his view was now out to the black of space.

He didn’t respond immediately.

Who was he?

“Kai. Kai Nazca.” He finally answered.


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